Tuesday, December 18, 2007

hi

So far in my book, Jennifer is at the police station, & she is getting questioned, & they are taking pictures of her injuries, even though she caused them herself when she threw herself down the hill. But although Jennifer made up the attempted rape, she isn't being very smart about it. She is the very first victim that the police know of so far that has heard the attackers voice. No one else was spoken to by the attacker, when they were really attacked. & although Jennifer didn't really hear the attackers voice, because she wasn't really attacked, she said she did. Jennifer also said that he grabbed her, & she hit him & them he pushed her & threw her down the hill. I think that she's going to keep lying & get all caught up in her lies, & that's going to be her downfall, & what causes her to get caught in all of these lies.

2 comments:

Jessica T said...

wow this blog is really good. your book sounds good. keep up the good work. k byee

Mr. Malley said...

Amanda...try to frame your response around one of the response questions I provided to you. That way, you can start off and build from a point. This response is kind of plotty and every which way but loose.